Any travellers out there identify with this?
Linking with Rise and Write from Natalia's Out of the Writer's Closet daily writing prompts.
Big bag's burden.
Oh Connie I love it!
Your poem has me considering writing an obituary for a noble bag that served me for 11 years of heavy travel before its spine broke. Bags deserve respect for all the work they do for us. I see things as very much alive in their own way, so this was very enjoyable for me. :)
Oh no, its spine broke. What a vivid picture.We definitely form relationships with favourite bags.Love to read the obituary! Jazzy Jack
What a story it could tell viewing valises; grappling with grips; hobnobbing with haversacks;poked in with ports; bouncing with bilums; balancing with backpacks; then pursuing a purse! LOve your post! D&M xxxx
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Beautiful inspiring verse!x
Oh yeah! Wonderful words in a famous picture.Have a nice sunday
I love how you painted a picture with words! Vividly and... how should I say it, like in 3D... sculpturally? :-)Glad you were inspired and jumped on it! Write! Create! Hugs!
Sounds very familiar :0)xx
I love your poem, Jack, and I'm still lined up to buy your book. I want it signed, of course. xoxo
If a topic has special significance for you, or touches you in some way, I'd love to hear your story! I will return the favour and we will gently touch hands across the miles...or kilometres :-)